Saturday, August 17, 2013

Short Story Writing Workshop: The Results

A while ago I took a short-story writing class at the library.  One of our homework assignments was to write a 300 word story based around two sisters.  Here's what I came up with.


The Visit
Mary stared out the windshield at the barren winter landscape.   “While you were away on vacation Gary and I split up; we’re getting a divorce,” she blurted.  Patty opened her mouth, closed it, and opened it again without saying a word.  All Patty talked about since she got in the car was her latest exotic trip. ‘Misery loves company,’ she childishly thought.

“He cheated on me.  Late nights, weekend business meetings the whole clichéd bit.  He’s Facebook friends with her; that’s how I found out... she tagged him in a status update when they were at some hotel,” Mary explained.

“The kids,” Patty asked. 

“They know dad’s away on a trip.  I haven’t told them he’s not coming back,” Mary answered.

“They’re not stupid,” Patty pointed out.

“I know that,” Mary snapped.  They were both quiet for a while lost in thought.  Patty counted the snow banks until they arrived at the house.

“Do you still love him?” Patty sought to understand her sister’s bitterness.

“Yes... No... I don’t know.  He’s the father of my children.  He was supposed to be my one great love.  But people grow apart you know.  Maybe that’s what happened with us?” Mary speculated.  Someday she might be able to buy that; after the bitterness and anger faded.

“That’s likely,” Patty suggested.  Mary parked the car, and started to open the door.  Patty put her hand on Mary’s back.  “For what it’s worth I think you’re making the right decision. 

Mary audibly sighed climbing out of the car: “Kids! Aunt Patty’s here.  She’s got presents,” Patty found herself hugged almost before she could stand up.   Another visit had begun.

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